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mother goddess,
your whole deep greens
astonish.
& your pale yellow slivers of sun
& then the blue sky sleeves
with your open fertile hands blossoming
out of them, small & serene.
your gaze a red innocence, heavy with curiousity
& need.
the white
white veil
won't dare
touch your
cheek bones.
it graces your glowing forehead, forgotten entirely
after the shock of love in your glance.
you know this man's  
profound black browns, his steady eye
the flickering immodest uncaring of calculation
hung over his lids, over the hazy grey
of city sky, this hard bent man stooped
with briefcase in hand, thickly
cloaked, thin lipped, top hatted.
you the warm unnamed bride & he
the sharp nosed Man
insisting.
you the pleasant & powerful, indulgent
of his every little
lovely evil,
the eternal forgiveness in the curve
of your lips, the unspoken
colour of power. you the patient
the unending source.
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just "the bride"
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to giovanna cenami by anyimacielgray "Rachel layers her words precisely and inhabits the emotional context behind the brush strokes. She breathes life into the work with her words." (Suggesters Words) ( Suggested by SedahLiah and Featured by IrrevocableFate )
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saevuswinds Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Student Writer
I love the colors that are mentioned in this. Great work.
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anyimacielgray Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014
thanks so much! (:
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anyimacielgray Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014
why thank you (:
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MoirailZoned Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful... Wonderful work.
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anyimacielgray Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014
thank you dear! <3
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Karinta Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Student General Artist
Love, love, LOVE the colour metaphors and the way you subtly yet noticeably work them in.
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anyimacielgray Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014
thanks very much for the comment and your kind words (:
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Karinta Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Student General Artist
Aw, thank you!! You're welcome.
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